group discussion (for real this time)

GROUP: Brian Hildman, Dianna Bentley, Jeff Carpenter

Brian Hildiman:
Brian has to work on drawing the proportions of the ribcage. His blog pictures were a little informal but you could still see all the information on the drawing pad. The mannequin looks good. Brian learned about the skeletal structure and the importance of knowing it to draw an accurate figure.

Dianna Bently:
I could see an exceptional progression in Dianna's work from the beginning of the semester to now. She has a good grasp on contour drawing but needs to pay more attention to proportion.
Everything in her photos were visible. She said her biggest improvement was in the way she drew the figure; at first she drew outlines but now she tries to draw the body from the inside out.

Jeff Carpenter:
I will pay more attention to the layout of my blog. The alignment of my pictures weren't very consistent. I received good feedback on my gesture drawings, especially the accuracy of the way I drew the pelvis. At the beginning of the semester I felt confident in my line structure. It was fast and I acknowledged line variation. This was before i was before I was introduced to seeing the body in a different way. I am a little bit more cautious with my lines and the result is slow tedious lines. I'll work on my line confidence, the more I practice the better I'll become.